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Open Poetry #41

Until Time's End

FadingSun
Member

since 2000-05-01

Posts 76
Southern California

0 posted 2007-08-07 05:32 PM

I feel a warm tickle as we kiss,
like a feather floating across my lips.
There's a map of the world upon your face,
But tonight, you're free in our embrace.

Like a brooke running gently in time,
the warmth of your body courses through mine.
And as we fall between the cover's creases,
the candlewick's glow slowly ceases.

Even in the dark, there's light in your eyes,
like the peeking of the moon through the blinds.
The threads of our souls unweave and enmesh,
as we begin a dance, flesh on flesh.

And as you rest your precious head,
upon my chest, here in our bed.
There's no place in time I'd rather be,
But here tonight, just you and me.

I'll be with you until time's end,
my lover... my wife... my best friend.

© Steve Nelson

In the sight of Love, fear isn't even as great as a single hair: in the law of Love, everything is offered as a sacrifice

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

1 posted 2007-08-07 05:38 PM

very beautiful, it has a sensual softness to it...very personal yet, openly warm and loving...enjoyed

secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant

since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

2 posted 2007-08-07 08:24 PM

VERY nice!

applause!!

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2007-08-09 04:55 PM

Nice to appreciate your blessings...James

FadingSun
Member

since 2000-05-01

Posts 76
Southern California

4 posted 2007-08-09 10:04 PM

Poems about my wife don't seem to flow as easily as others, which is odd because she's the love of my life. But when I "get to" write one about her, my toes curl with happiness

I absolutely loved writing this one

In the sight of Love, fear isn't even as great as a single hair: in the law of Love, everything is offered as a sacrifice

DelilahStrong
New Member

since 2007-08-11

Posts 2
placentia, ca

5 posted 2007-08-11 01:04 AM

sultry and romantic... loved every minute of it!

I'll follow you into the dark

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