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Open Poetry #41

Open This Door

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

0 posted 2007-08-07 12:32 PM

Let be the one,
Let be the love,
For you,
Now,
Don't let my heart break
Once again,
I want to feel love again,
So let me in,
Inside your heart,
It is raining today,
Wondering if I will walk
through this door,
I want to talk to you
This love,
This feelings,
Don't close the door,
Open this door,
Let me in,
Let me be the one,
Let me feel the touch,
Open this door,
Open once again
To your heart,
Let me find an answer,
Let me feel the touch again,
Open this door,
Let me walk through this door,
And see through your heart,
Open this door,
Could this love be a magic?
So open this door,
Let me feel the rain,
Pouring down on me,
Open this door,
Let me walk through this door

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

1 posted 2007-08-07 04:46 PM

Wonderful...yes, no matter how strong our desire for another, they must open the door for our heart to touch theirs...James

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

2 posted 2007-08-07 04:57 PM

Enjoyed this soft and gentle yearning.

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2007-08-07 05:06 PM

Let be the love,

~*~

Indeed, dear, let it be...

very soft, very endearing.

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

4 posted 2007-08-07 06:20 PM

this was a feeling of what poetry is...honest songs of the heart...beautiful

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

5 posted 2007-08-08 06:29 AM

van, this is a flower in a woman's hands, enjoyed it

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

6 posted 2007-08-08 01:49 PM

Oh my, I see this as a song, what beautiful lyrics it would make

Ruth

I am nothing special...and my name will soon be forgotten,but I've loved another with all my heart and soul,and to me,this has always been enough.~N.S

bel1e
Senior Member

since 2006-07-24

Posts 1631

7 posted 2007-08-08 01:52 PM

enjoyed this, V~

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