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secondhanddreampoet
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0 posted 2007-08-06 06:47 PM


  Dreamland Beach Sunset

Shimmering mirror-pools…
reflecting soft salmon clouds
tipped with saffron-yellow
in a deep azurine sky,
embrace the rock-phantasm
silhouettes and sea-stars
sleeping in the gentle sands,
along Dreamland beach…
kind and silent semaphores
of Nature’s pure serenity
  and simple truth!



© Copyright 2007 Bruce E. Adams Jr. - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2007-08-06 06:49 PM


soft, gentle, soothing
capable of quieting the anxiety of day

Roysie
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2 posted 2007-08-06 07:02 PM


I think you captured it there Dream...Bravo!
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3 posted 2007-08-06 08:26 PM


It is wonderful to see the world through your words ...
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4 posted 2007-08-06 09:26 PM


Lots of beautiful word pictures in this......Most enjoyable!

Eric

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5 posted 2007-08-06 09:44 PM


Another beauty to enjoy!

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6 posted 2007-08-07 07:25 AM



  Bruce, peaceful painting through imagery. Very uplifting.

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7 posted 2007-08-07 03:31 PM


Like this...James
secondhanddreampoet
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8 posted 2007-08-07 08:37 PM


Thanks grandly to all who commented on this write!
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