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Midnitesun
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0 posted 2007-08-06 11:32 AM



Spooled spider webs dangle,
(but cling tenaciously)
to disturbed vines trailing the fence;
broken tendrils a tell-tale sign
a sleek cat walked the narrow ledge
'neath last night's full moon.
I lean tentatively against the porch,
notice paw prints on the top rail
etched in the morning's dew kiss.
An assassin beetle boldly marches
as if he were guarding sacred grounds,
while underneath the ledge,
two determined wasps busy themselves
preparing a nest (like some hidden agenda)
from which to strike
unsuspecting warm blooded beings.
I marvel at their audacity,
for directly above the wasp nest sits
the predatory cat's food and water bowls.
No mice live around here,
and I smile, wondering out loud
how long this solo assassin beetle
and the wasp team will survive.
Out here in the woods,
Darwinian justice
prevails.


© Copyright 2007 Kathleen Kacy Stafford - All Rights Reserved
ggrn3
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1 posted 2007-08-06 11:40 AM


I loved everything about this poem. It was eloquent. I'm not sure what Darwinian justice is but I'm sure I'll find out some day.

Garfield

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2 posted 2007-08-06 01:13 PM


Dramatic and action-packed, Midnitesun! Beautifully written.
Midnitesun
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3 posted 2007-08-06 01:17 PM


OH, I thank you both for reading and commenting on this, a moment's reverie from my vacation in Washington to visit with my daughter.
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4 posted 2007-08-06 01:33 PM


~~~what a quaint view into a moment~~so well captured~~~~

~~loved it

  

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5 posted 2007-08-06 05:27 PM


excellent 'slice of life and Nature'
impression!

serious, sustained applause!!

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