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Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12
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0 posted 2007-08-05 12:37 PM


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That salmon
Didn’t go up the river

And who can blame him
Swimming so freely
About the sea


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DennisTheMenace
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since 2005-09-04
Posts 240

1 posted 2007-08-05 04:06 PM


Fish read Huan Yi
confusing poetry

swim in circles all day long
forgot where it belong

TomMark
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since 2007-07-27
Posts 2133
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2 posted 2007-08-05 09:04 PM


With such a decent knowledge that it is absolutely happy!!!!

Cool poem.

Tomtoo

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