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Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688
Waukegan

0 posted 2007-08-05 12:08 PM


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The world
is not words—

The rain cooled—
Summer night air


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Kethry
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia
1 posted 2007-08-05 06:23 AM


You are right the world is not words but with so few to paint such vivid pictures less is more.

a good commitee can decimate communication.

DennisTheMenace
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since 2005-09-04
Posts 240

2 posted 2007-08-05 03:41 PM


And just where does the frog fit it?  Another "Huh?"
Short and visual(I guess) Between puffs?

ethome
Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
3 posted 2007-08-05 09:07 PM


You're right the world is not words, there is the odd bureeleep in there....Just sit by the pond for a while and you will hear it......Yep!

Eric

TomMark
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since 2007-07-27
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4 posted 2007-08-05 09:30 PM


The world is not words but worth of words and made by words.

cool poems always!

Tomtoo

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