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secondhanddreampoet
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a 'Universalist' !

0 posted 2007-08-04 05:49 PM


   Time’s Horizon

A ruby sunset paints
an astonished sky
of deep opalescent-blue
with carnelian clouds
trimmed in burgundy…
over verdant foothills
that dance forever
with the mist,
toward the vanishing
  point of all dreams…
that linger just beyond
  Time’s horizon.

May we but dare to follow?!



© Copyright 2007 Bruce E. Adams Jr. - All Rights Reserved
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Gaia
1 posted 2007-08-04 06:15 PM


The word exquisite just doesn't do this justice!
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2 posted 2007-08-04 06:32 PM


dreampoet~

this is a dream poem...rich and vivd colors....I love, "astonished sky"


  

JamesMichael
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3 posted 2007-08-04 06:36 PM


Wonderful...some dreams we hold onto and some we let go...not necessarily of our dreams, but the objects or persons within our dreams...James
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4 posted 2007-08-05 04:43 PM


Poet ~

I love your palette here!

Especially enjoyed:
"that dance forever
with the mist,
toward the vanishing
  point of all dreams…
that linger just beyond
  Time’s horizon."

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5 posted 2007-08-05 08:02 PM


the poem speaks so much

but this--

that dance forever
with the mist,
toward the vanishing
  point of all dreams…
that linger just beyond


oh wow sir, another journey into the mystic!

~~**~~
Life is a balance
of holding on and letting go (KU)

TomMark
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6 posted 2007-08-06 01:28 AM


beautiful. A diamond poem!

Tomtoo

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7 posted 2007-08-06 10:31 PM


Nice color imagery. Well done.
Marchmadness
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8 posted 2007-10-11 06:28 PM


There are those of us who would love to follow our dreams into this wonderful place
that only the "Master Poet" knows.
                                 Ida

The Lady
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9 posted 2007-10-12 11:55 PM


the way you paint life poet
makes me need to follow


Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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10 posted 2007-10-13 06:29 AM


this was a wonderful write Bruce... very much enjoyed.. RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

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