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bel1e
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0 posted 2007-08-04 12:02 PM


and here the graveyard pastures
of fairytales gone amiss,
are a clockshop of ticks and rushes,
the sodden plinth of drenched copses,
blue feathers, branches,
where so many things become unhinged,
lose their wings, like so many mittens,
phantom kittens in the mist,
as good a place as any to sit
with this shard in the terracotta heart,

here is where she starts
a heaven-torn mimicry of raucous chacklings,
cacklings, further, further, further the cries
ascend, ascend, ascend, her yes
becomes flesh in flesh,
white-winged and fire swept
among the empty branches,

by November
99 novenas are nestled in my throat,
and sing in the sweetest scent of vanilla
and persimmons
and kisses curled in silver,
along the cradle of lips, let
the mockingbird feast on its myth,
its pale accustaions, unfasten
perdition like a promise
from its wings, it brings
the pollen of a belladonna dream.


     

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divine chaos
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dancing 'neath the moon
1 posted 2007-08-04 12:34 PM


i am quite green with envy, wishing I'd written this!  you have an amazing pen, m'dear

~Sheli

bel1e
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2 posted 2007-08-04 12:58 PM


Sheli~

thanks so much for the kind reply~
hugs~

  

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
3 posted 2007-08-04 03:39 PM


You are a very talented writer! I enjoyed every descriptive and poetic mot in this exquisite poem!

Love & Light,
EA

JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
4 posted 2007-08-04 04:03 PM


Enjoyed...James
bel1e
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5 posted 2007-08-04 04:09 PM


EarthAngel~~

((thank you)) for the warm reply...thanx for peeking in, love~

  

bel1e
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6 posted 2007-08-04 04:12 PM


thanx Jams~~~

  

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