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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2007-08-03 03:34 PM


The Pleasures of Luscious Weather

When I looked into her eyes
I liked the way she
looked at me.

As I kissed her lips
her kisses lingered
soft and tenderly.

Feelings have blossomed
to bring us
closer together.

Hearts in sweet embrace
not unlike the pleasures
of luscious weather.

JamesLee
03August
2007



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Krishankins
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1 posted 2007-08-04 11:10 PM


Those are the big raindrops on a hot summer day.

Refreshing

My child's smile tells me there's still hope

JamesMichael
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2 posted 2007-08-05 06:56 AM


Thank you Krishankins for the nice response...James
divine chaos
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3 posted 2007-08-05 10:13 AM


James, you are such a hopeless romantic ..
it is beautiful and so heartwarming to
read you

~Sheli

By words the mind is winged
~Aristophanes~

Huan Yi
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4 posted 2007-08-05 05:24 PM


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This almost seems Arabic
Very good

John


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bel1e
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5 posted 2007-08-05 05:38 PM


sways lovely on the tongue, James~~

  

ethome
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6 posted 2007-08-05 08:47 PM


A romantic metaphor James and a good one!

Eric

The Lady
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7 posted 2007-08-07 02:49 PM



beautifully done James

LeeJ
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8 posted 2007-08-07 02:53 PM


soft and tenderly

sighs

well done James

JamesMichael
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9 posted 2007-08-07 04:49 PM


Thank you divine, Huan, belle, ethome and Lee J for the nice responses...James
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