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o.le.crépuscule Junior Member
since 2007-07-29
Posts 17partout. |
come and see me here- reach your white gloved hand into the pit of my stomach, and pull out what you will. just don't let the nurses see. they just changed my sheets. put the needle where you see best and don't let me close my eyes. whatever you do don't let them shut, make sure they're wide and cold and desolate. in the end they won't know it was you and you could be my doctor if you dispose of the sharps right. i don't want you infected. it's a nasty cough. ôte maintenant | tes souliers |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I'm reading you, Kate. I just don't know how to respond~~ M |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
I feel the same way - a bit at a loss for a response. But, I have read this four times now - so that says it I guess. Thank you Alison |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
. Now this is simply very good. With your permission I would like to add it to my Word File of poems by others, (it will be in good company). Again very good, John |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"make sure they're wide and cold and desolate" I like your style sharp concise leaves nothing unsaid |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Very good indeed! |
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