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Strangle Hold (Wandering Wonderings)
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Strangle Hold (Wandering Wonderings) |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989
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Haze hangs heavily over horizon's eyes squinting into the distance wandering over the wonderings of if morning had greeted you also this way with the same sighing sounds of yesterday whispering in the voiceless wind of today. The quiet is deafening, this air thick strangling me in this silence of day. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
ah...but the alliteration makes it sound so lovely...  |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
lovely writing in this early morning heat~~~~  M |
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bel1e Senior Member
since 2006-07-24
Posts 1631 |
~~yes this rolls off the tongue right into the splendor of morning~~ ~beautiful |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
wull yeah...just yesterday driving to work, soupy fog... hehe, just kidding....missy, this was so very pretty and poignant... thank you for writing and sharing... Hope you are doing fine.... stay safe Luv Lee J. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
You are so beautiful to me, and so very appreciated. Thanks and  |
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BBGrrl Member
since 2007-07-17
Posts 181BC, Canada |
Very pretty words, but feels so - quiet -introspective. Enjoyed this very much. |
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