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Jammy
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since 2007-07-30
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Apoptosis

0 posted 2007-08-01 07:13 PM


Listen to the echoes which resound within your heart,
Open your eyes to the ways in which you strengthen me,
Replete from years of admiration I am seamlessly left,
Vivified by your love and guarded by your loyalty.

I’ll hold you up amidst the quaint angelic seraphim,
And have them sing praises of your intransient beauty,
Their wondrous melodies cannot compare to your radiance,
Even if such a claim is stringent blasphemy.

My mistress, you are the hope within my heart,
Bolstering my will to live just to gaze into your eyes,
Take me in your arms, dearest, take my pain away,
For when we are apart, I can hear your mournful cries.

Never take away your love, and never leave my side,
Together we can make this world a more enchanting place,
For even if we must meet death, our love will overcome;
For our passion can heal all wounds with but a singular embrace.

© Copyright 2007 Jonathan Amidon - All Rights Reserved
aziza
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since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995
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1 posted 2007-08-05 04:43 PM


A most lovely declaration of your love.
I can only imagine how deeply she was touched to receive this.

Thank you for sharing your heart.
Alison

JamesMichael
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2 posted 2007-08-05 07:54 PM


Silky...James
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