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Mr. Omniscient
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since 2006-10-28
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0 posted 2007-07-31 07:59 AM


Profound

I want to hear something deep,
Something so profound.
Tell me,
Show me,
Feed me,
Enlighten me on what you have found.
Show me what has been concealed with sound,
Some ask…
How can words hurt me…?
How…?
You must be unaware of how powerful those vibration are that travel down your canal,
Sound vibrations rolled off the tongue just right and injected with a certain attitude can stick around for an hour,
Make the biggest man cower
With the intake of a sound so sour.
Your probably asking
“How can you hear a flavor?”
Well I’ll tell you,
Your ears can hear, taste, smell, feel, and see.

That’s why,
I want to hear something so profound,
So profound,
It adds weight on your mind like weight on a scale,
By the pound,
So profound,
It breaks the ground and lifts into a mound.
So profound,
It’s a rebound,
So profound,
They stick around,
Linger,
Grab the attention of a singer.

Profound…

© Copyright 2007 Alexander Higginbottom - All Rights Reserved
BBGrrl
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since 2007-07-17
Posts 181
BC, Canada
1 posted 2007-07-31 11:52 AM


I love this!  Yes, I understand.  An artist can allow you to change senses, to relearn your reactions in unique ways.

Excellent.

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