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mosey town in hemingway
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mosey town in hemingway |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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I could go there again in my mind a dozen times within each eye blink to the sun dress daydreamery of mosey town's downtown there is always a hemingway sun reclining against the afternoon across from a cove with no ocean and your windows are the whiskey that make me lean on my elbows waiting to be served a smile with over your shoulder eyes in spite of my poor passing and you high heel my imagination nearly barefoot nude sometimes from the wrists down to fingers with a handsome woman's waving and then the light changes to mondays ______________ daark [This message has been edited by Dark Stranger (08-01-2007 06:27 AM).] |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
ohhhh such softly beautiful visuals in this lovely peace D. Excellent work here big d.  |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
there is always a hemingway sun reclining against the afternoon across from a cove with no ocean and your windows are the whiskey that make me lean on my elbows waiting to be served a smile with over your shoulder eyes in spite of my poor passing and you high heel my imagination too many good lines~~ making me wish I wore high heels ...or at least had a reason to  M |
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Elan Member
since 2002-05-03
Posts 382State of Wide Eye |
Perhaps a little Highland Park to help you with the windows? So good to read you again...  Lady Élan ~ |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
yep, no high heels for me either...but barefoot, I can do |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
simply excellent!! serious, sustained applause!! |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
a hazy summer view from your big-screen... love it |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms gs, thanks babe ___________ ms MMs, ah teacher, you would always be lovely in high heals, thanks ms ______________ elan, thank you for the tiptoeing _____________ suesea, barefoot is perfect, please continue and thank you ________________ secondhand, thank you sir ______________ ms kahlil, thanks lady friend for the touch of the big screen |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
I like what I like when I like it and I like this. So there. No comments necessary. I just like it. A |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms az, you make a smile on the statue of the dark street ranger any day, thanks ms |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
I'm with Alison... I like it too!  RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
"reclining hemingway sun" D, with your fine landscaping imagery, I can feel the warm in it.... |
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