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Warrior Bristo
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since 2007-07-28
Posts 96
Arizona

0 posted 2007-07-31 12:42 PM



She will dance
Upon the shore
And the sea
Does her adore

Amidst the soft
Light of the moon
She dances there
While spirits swoon

She tickles the sand
And teases the sea
So precious and sweet
As love should be

warrior undefeated

© Copyright 2007 Brenna Nicole Bohn - All Rights Reserved
secondhanddreampoet
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since 2006-11-07
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1 posted 2007-07-31 08:29 AM


I really like:

"...tickles the sand
And teases the sea(!)"

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
2 posted 2007-07-31 09:32 AM


Enjoyed...James
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