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Warrior Bristo
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since 2007-07-28
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0 posted 2007-07-31 12:09 PM



My destiny is fixed
By fate my strife is biding
Despite the careless infantries
The cavalries come riding

Though the spirit angst hath broken
The will to strive is strong
The enemy comes marching
To an old forsaken song

My geart is weary and forlorn
Morale is fouled and worn
But I shall battle on
Through the wounds of war and scorn

warrior undefeated

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secondhanddreampoet
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1 posted 2007-07-31 12:21 PM


nice 'write'!

'heart' in line # 9?!

I really like:

"The enemy comes marching
To an old forsaken song(!)"

applause!!

Warrior Bristo
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since 2007-07-28
Posts 96
Arizona
2 posted 2007-07-31 12:24 PM


thank you very much! i'll fix that typo right away!

warrior undefeated

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