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Warrior Bristo Member
since 2007-07-28
Posts 96Arizona 
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Mist and shadow A spirit's grace The angel,Time Does keep his pace The nights divine The days unfold The breaths not breathed The tales untold Love that comes With words to say Tears that come Are swept away The stains that stay A memory's wake A present day For future's sake The angel's wings Ride thee will Until thine throbbing Heart lies still Then by death Sing thee sweet Of wonderous times And Time's defeat warrior undefeated [This message has been edited by Warrior Bristo (07-30-2007 11:46 PM).] |
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Warrior Bristo Member
since 2007-07-28
Posts 96Arizona |
what do you think? warrior undefeated |
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Hyaunt Member
since 2007-07-12
Posts 74 |
very nice! welcome to PIP. Hyaunt |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
a most pleasant 'write'! WELCOME to 'P.I.P'! is that to be angel's wings in line 17? applause for this poem!! |
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Warrior Bristo Member
since 2007-07-28
Posts 96Arizona |
yes, thank you. |
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Devious Intellectual Member
since 2006-05-08
Posts 112 |
i liked this you put time in its place, if you decide to make it longer more time themes would be lovely also |
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