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Martie
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0 posted 2007-07-30 12:38 PM



Pearls,
they must be pearls
on the elegant slide
below a woman's neck.

Pearls,
showering from sprinklers,
tick tick tick
across the nape of summer lawns
where the lip of one small blade of grass
quiets for a moment and welcomes the song.

Pearls,
so precious
they are kept within a rich white cloud
whose cheek lies on the mountain's top.
So unquenched am I with need
to open this liquid treasure,
that, like all things, I thirst
while waiting for the glass to be
fast poured upon the restless winds
to wash the air.

Pearls,
they must be pearls
upon the brow of bronzing man,
so sure of his inside sea
that he attracts a glance from me.
With some magic handkerchief
I'd wipe the jewel made with salt
and lick the curl of inner light
that longs for rain tonight.

Pearls,
could it be,
that rumble yonder in the tree
and take the blood to boil hot on this
sweet summer day?


Pearls,
it must be pearls
I hear within the quiet heat,
aiming for a tree and then a leaf
they quiet my heart to instrument in tune;
then harkening to the sky's perfume so rare
I feel one fall onto my hair.

© Copyright 2007 Martie Odell Ingebretsen - All Rights Reserved
MoonShadow
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1 posted 2007-07-30 01:22 PM


Lovely use of metaphores in graphic imagery.

          MoonShadow
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Honeybunch
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2 posted 2007-07-30 03:35 PM


Beautiful, Martie.  Maybe I'll dream of pearls.  Your words have been sorely missed.
secondhanddreampoet
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3 posted 2007-07-30 08:42 PM


a most fine ‘write’ (especially for
  this Summer ‘eve!)…

I especially LOVE:

(precious) “Pearls…
within a rich white cloud
whose cheek lies on the mountain's top.”;

“fast poured upon the restless winds
  to wash the air.”;

AND:

“they must be pearls
upon the brow of bronzing man,
so sure of his inside sea(!)”

serious, sustained applause!!


iliana
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4 posted 2007-07-30 11:30 PM


Love this, Martie!   ....jo
ThisDiamond
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5 posted 2007-07-30 11:43 PM


So pretty, Martiword.
icebox
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6 posted 2007-07-31 02:29 AM


Amazing.

Truly a poem that reflects the beauty of the poet's soul.

Thank you for sharing it.

Elan
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7 posted 2007-07-31 09:19 AM


One can feel the mist in this
and know the gentle touch
of the writer's hand.

My sister, this is so lovely...





Lady Élan ~
My only sense of direction is...Up.

Goodknight
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8 posted 2007-08-04 03:49 PM


sure wonderful imagery!  I so enjoyed watching and feeling the images pass as I read - great Martie - Paul
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9 posted 2007-08-04 04:05 PM


pearls are now forever a secret smile for me...a lovely lesson from nature and a message I needed to hear today...



Love you sweet Marite.

bel1e
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10 posted 2007-08-04 04:11 PM


~fantastic poem...I like the use of repition...and the sleek imagery~~~

great stuff~

  

secondhanddreampoet
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11 posted 2007-08-05 09:42 PM


I just had to read this again!!

simply wonderful!!

latearrival
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12 posted 2007-08-06 03:51 AM


Read this  the other day and am back to read and enjoy. You have a lovely way of expressing your feelings. latearrival
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13 posted 2007-08-06 09:39 AM


ah..the imagery and the metaphors..the sleek grace of word on page and tongue..
well done m'friend.. well done..

Bronzeage
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14 posted 2007-08-06 11:29 PM


Very nice write. My favorite part:

Pearls,
they must be pearls
upon the brow of bronzing man,
so sure of his inside sea
that he attracts a glance from me.

hoot_owl_rn
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15 posted 2007-08-08 01:52 PM


I've never heard rain likened to pearls before. I'll certainly remember that image the next time it rains
Ruth

I am nothing special...and my name will soon be forgotten,but I've loved another with all my heart and soul,and to me,this has always been enough.~N.S

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