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secondhanddreampoet
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0 posted 2007-07-29 11:50 PM


  Forest-mountain Road

Twilight tree silhouettes
  marching
through a blue-spectral
   mist
along forest-mountain
   road.

Time without purpose
whispering secrets…
to no one!

  


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1 posted 2007-07-30 12:04 PM


ohhhhh wow, you really left this open for the mind to wander.....beautiful!

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Berenice
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2 posted 2007-07-30 12:39 PM


A jewel!!!!!
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3 posted 2007-07-30 12:09 PM


"time without purpose"  It's hard to imagine such a place or thing...and I wonder if it was found, if the thought of it in this beautiful poem would not be better than the reality.    
ArtSolstice
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4 posted 2007-07-30 01:58 PM


A pleasure to read, and a fine place to visit. Enjoyed reading this out loud

"Time without purpose
whispering secrets…
to no one!"

... and appreciating the alliteration.

WindWalker
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5 posted 2007-08-10 11:39 PM


This was really Good!!!!!!!!!!
iliana
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6 posted 2007-08-10 11:43 PM


Now, that is what I call the scenic route!
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7 posted 2007-08-11 12:00 PM


"Time without purpose
whispering secrets…
to no one!"

seems that way, listening to the wind in the trees...

Kahlil
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8 posted 2007-08-11 05:31 PM


I love the view of the marching twilight tree silhouettes.
Now I will always think of them whispering secrets.

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Gaia
9 posted 2007-08-13 07:10 PM


whispering trees
yes, I've heard them

misty-morning-muses

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10 posted 2007-12-31 01:57 PM


I don't know how I missed this one.
                               Ida

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