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secondhanddreampoet
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0 posted 2007-07-29 09:46 PM


Time Suspended

Mirror lake
reflecting
fine-amber sun
in auburn-fire
   sky

Blue canoe and
tiny red boat
floating freely…

Time suspended!


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Berenice
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1 posted 2007-07-29 10:53 PM


Absolutely wonderful. What a beautiful scene you are painting with such rich color.
poem of diamond!

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2 posted 2007-07-30 12:06 PM


amber is a favorite color of mine.....this is beautiful....and full of "time"...

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of holding on and letting go (KU)

ArtSolstice
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3 posted 2007-07-30 02:02 PM


A fine poem to read 'time and time again' -- both for the vision created and the pleasure of experiencing your palette's circular movement ...  from bright warm, to cool-warm, to cool, then back to brightness for one last flash.
Beautifully done!

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4 posted 2007-07-30 05:32 PM


"in auburn-fire
   sky"

just love that!

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5 posted 2007-08-01 02:25 AM


Bruce

I think I went to this lake fishing last fall.

Very beautiful, my artist friend.

A

Kit McCallum
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6 posted 2007-08-01 06:27 AM


You've captured a "kodak-moment" via words here Bruce ... what a wonderful and calming visual indeed! Much enjoyed.

Best wishes,
/Kit

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7 posted 2007-08-01 10:44 PM


This left me sighing in a moment of amber reverie.  
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8 posted 2007-09-17 05:07 PM


simple but beautiful.
ArtSolstice
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9 posted 2007-09-18 11:21 AM


Revisited for a brief vacation -- beautiful!
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10 posted 2007-09-18 12:16 PM


good read
Bobby Jordan
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11 posted 2007-09-18 04:35 PM


Secondhanddreampoet,

Yes, I've seen the lake at Eagles Mere look like that.

Nice work.

Bobby

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12 posted 2007-09-18 06:56 PM


Your minimalism has such great appeal!

Wonderful scenery!

Love,
Margherita

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13 posted 2007-09-19 05:16 AM


Nice...James
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14 posted 2007-09-19 06:53 AM


a peaceful moment captured~~


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