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o.le.crépuscule
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since 2007-07-29
Posts 17
partout.

0 posted 2007-07-29 06:08 PM


it's you i'm calling cheri
from the top of the stairs
bare feet plastered to the hardwood floor
and even though i know
i know that
you're deaf
i can smile
and pretend
because cheri
you are the rag doll
the one that sits
in the bottom of that hope chest
in the front hall way
(the one you can't see
because i know
i know
you're blind too)
waiting for it's resurrection
that breath of fresh air

i'd bring it to you cheri
but i'm still at the top
of the stairs

© Copyright 2007 Kate - All Rights Reserved
Larry C
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1 posted 2007-07-29 06:16 PM


Kate!
Welcome to Passions. What a fine entrance. I hope you like it here as much as I have. This is a great place. Enjoy.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane,
I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

1slick_lady
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since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace
2 posted 2007-07-29 07:34 PM


outstanding
and welcome to the passion

Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
3 posted 2007-07-29 08:22 PM


A wonderful first post, Kate.
Welcome to Passions!

Please,
check your Email
for a very Special Greeting.


poeticdestiny
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since 2007-07-29
Posts 19
Georgia
4 posted 2007-07-29 10:12 PM


Absolutely lovely poem
wranx
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since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn
5 posted 2007-07-29 11:21 PM


A very nice piece

Excellent work

Bronzeage
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since 2007-07-20
Posts 197

6 posted 2007-07-29 11:50 PM


Very well done.

Welcome to pip

Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09
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7 posted 2007-07-30 08:10 AM


Nicely done. Welcome to Pip Place
nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
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Between the Lines
8 posted 2007-07-30 08:27 AM


waiting for ...
that breath of fresh air


enjoyed~~

M

MoonShadow
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since 2001-08-02
Posts 943
Dark side of the Moon.
9 posted 2007-07-30 01:18 PM


  Wonderfull opening gift.
          Welcome to Passions.

            MoonShadow
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