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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2007-07-29 05:46 PM


Thoughts of The Heart

When you find
a sweetheart
you know the thoughts
of your heart,
but when they find
a sweetheart
and you are
the one in
their heart
they've already
revealed and can
no longer conceal
the thoughts of
their heart.

JamesLee
29July
2007




[This message has been edited by JamesMichael (07-30-2007 07:28 AM).]

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froggy
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1 posted 2007-07-30 08:48 PM


Beautiful as always.
Enjoyed it.

:-)

Until he extends the circle of his compassion to all living things,
man will not himself find peace."

Albert Schweitzer,
Nobel Peace Prize Wi

Hyaunt
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since 2007-07-12
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2 posted 2007-07-30 08:53 PM


very nice!!

Hyaunt

Devious Intellectual
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3 posted 2007-07-30 10:41 PM


simple and very true
WindWalker
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4 posted 2007-08-06 12:36 PM


This was very Beautiful!!!!!!!!!!!!!
JamesMichael
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5 posted 2007-08-06 05:33 PM


Thank you froggy, Hyaunt, Devious and WindWalker for the nice responses...James
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