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DennisTheMenace
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0 posted 2007-07-29 04:16 PM



Oh Tu-be or not Tu-be,
Nothing on worth the time to see
So I side with laptop and Diet coke
And make many a poke
What light through window breaks
Lightening with thunder that shakes
And drops that heavily sound
Oh the sadness the soda can’t drown
Till the morrow comes with your return
To see and touch you I do yearn

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Bronzeage
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1 posted 2007-07-29 04:31 PM


Very funny. I enjoyed this.
DennisTheMenace
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2 posted 2007-07-29 04:33 PM


good to share my mirth with someone, thought noone was going to respond.
Thanks be to you

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3 posted 2007-07-29 05:16 PM


Wonderful humor...hope you are not turning Shakespear, or however you spell it, as I consider him excessively over dramatic...James
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4 posted 2007-07-29 08:27 PM


I'm glad you at least put mind and soul
to thought and memory...those you-tube mindsets can rob one of just so much...

it's good to see something thinking!




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5 posted 2007-07-29 08:51 PM


A good way to turn Shakey into something
funny....thanx!

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6 posted 2007-07-30 01:30 PM


Oh, god - that was fantastic!
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7 posted 2007-07-30 01:36 PM


Very funny! That is about the extent of my knowledge of ole Bill too.
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8 posted 2007-07-30 09:59 PM


Well, it does take more than a soda to drown sadness. As for William let him spin this was fun.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane,
I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

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9 posted 2007-07-30 10:36 PM


this was funny nice short read
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