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Open Poetry #41

A Challenge

Fairplay
Member

since 2007-01-15

Posts 222
England

0 posted 2007-07-29 02:29 PM

Is that a chip your shoulder?
Did you misread the angle on life
Tied up in rules easy broken
Bogged down in struggle and strife
Some would call it “A Challenge”
Hills just put there to climb
Empires invented in mind space
Tricks only to fill up the time
You learned that there is no heaven
Just choices twixt want and need
The rest of the World seems crazy
Selfishly driven by Greed

Eric Lance Davies

Warrior Bristo
Member

since 2007-07-28

Posts 96
Arizona

1 posted 2007-07-29 02:51 PM

i like it. There's a typo in the first line. Just wondering though...I'm a new user and i can't figure out how to get anyone to respond to my posts. When I do a search for my posts it just says i don't have any. nor do i have any nitfication of responds to my topics. Why is this?

warrior undefeated

Fairplay
Member

since 2007-01-15

Posts 222
England

2 posted 2007-07-29 03:05 PM

Thanks for the comments and you are right I cant find anything you have done ???? though your profile shows you have put stuff in.....

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