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Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2007-07-29 07:33 AM



the favorite place to ever be
was just down the road in nowhere
during the busy season
when everyone else was gone

but we didn't mind the silence
or the lack of future
because with no one else around
our pasts were always also missing

we met there one sun daze morning
while heading there separately
but intending fully on discovery
of some other just another

that wouldn't really care about
getting to know the details
of nothing or nobody in particular
but it was more complicated then

when our cars broke down
and everything was closed but time
and as we both had mentioned
there was no one else around

so we both just voted to stay here/there


_______________

daark

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inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392
Ohio
1 posted 2007-07-29 08:30 AM


the split decision
seems to jive

you got my vote honey

buenas dias

Dark Stranger
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West Coast
2 posted 2007-07-29 08:51 AM


thanks inky, your vote always works for me
Elan
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since 2002-05-03
Posts 382
State of Wide Eye
3 posted 2007-07-31 10:03 AM


so we both just voted to stay t/here

**

This really didn't need a rewrite,
but my thought swerved a little
within the lovely...

it is so good to catch up with you.


BBGrrl
Member
since 2007-07-17
Posts 181
BC, Canada
4 posted 2007-07-31 11:32 AM


our pasts were always also missing

This time smells of hay and is suffused with a golden glow.

And then reality hits.

Yes, daark.  *wry grin*


Dark Stranger
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West Coast
5 posted 2007-08-01 06:26 AM


elan, thank you for the touch


__________

ms bb, thank you for the grin

aziza
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since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995
Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!
6 posted 2007-08-03 01:01 AM


Did I mention that I love this?

A

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19
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West Coast
7 posted 2007-08-03 06:21 AM


ms az, oh that l word looks so sexy on your lips, thanks hon
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29
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8 posted 2007-08-03 07:10 AM


yep, enjoyed again Mr Daark! RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

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