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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 07-27-2007 05:55 PM       View Profile for Dark Stranger   Email Dark Stranger   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Dark Stranger

something about mosey town
and heaven being closer
when you put small talk
in a plastic bag
like bird seed

and say it is ok
for me to buy just one at a time
for the metal eagle in my mind
that never flies
except on occasional fridays

when your charms are in camo
with a smile that tiptoes
from the sides of your woman
and makes me forget my lines
although I read them a hundred times

to the velvet trees behind
the other side of your thoughts
where you parked your solitude
and wore your contemplation
as a strapless gown with velvet nails

mosey town is mostly heaven then

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1 posted 07-27-2007 06:20 PM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

and your seeds leave behind
growing, knowing smiles...

oh yes....

Dark Stranger
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2 posted 07-27-2007 06:29 PM       View Profile for Dark Stranger   Email Dark Stranger   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Stranger

ms sun, thank you lady friend
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3 posted 07-27-2007 06:44 PM       View Profile for Gentle Spirit   Email Gentle Spirit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Gentle Spirit

you make me smile!!  Lovely, this.
Dark Stranger
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4 posted 07-27-2007 06:45 PM       View Profile for Dark Stranger   Email Dark Stranger   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Stranger

ms gs, thank you lady
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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5 posted 07-28-2007 02:32 AM       View Profile for Roniece Dawson-Bruce   Email Roniece Dawson-Bruce   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Roniece Dawson-Bruce

when your charms are in camo
with a smile that tiptoes
from the sides of your woman
and makes me forget my lines
although I read them a hundred times

mmmm..... lovely words here Mr Daark!  

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Dark Stranger
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6 posted 07-28-2007 07:16 AM       View Profile for Dark Stranger   Email Dark Stranger   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Stranger

ms R & B, thanks so much
Earl Brinkman
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7 posted 10-06-2010 11:17 PM       View Profile for Earl Brinkman   Email Earl Brinkman   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Earl Brinkman

I moseyed through the poem and found the third stanza to my liking.  It seems people had stopped there often in the past.
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8 posted 10-07-2010 04:53 PM       View Profile for Dark Stranger   Email Dark Stranger   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Stranger

thanks eb...
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