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Huan Yi
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0 posted 2007-07-27 01:16 PM


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It’s Autumn
October

Again
There’s a wondrous mix
Of colors to be seen

Pale blue
The cool air rustles leaves
Whispering bits of poetry
To anyone who cares to hear

A fox squirrel scampers about
Burying acorns in the ground
With outspread wings a pair of geese
Glides over the water’s surface

A trout jumps up
Then disappears
So here’s another
Year we didn’t share
Making memories
For our evening hours

A church bell tolls
As the sun descends
Slowly below the horizon line

And an amber moon
Begins its trek
Reflecting light yet vacuous

Through those first though faint
Pocked with indifference
My God you were stupid
Stars


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© Copyright 2007 John Pawlik - All Rights Reserved
TomMark
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1 posted 2007-07-27 01:54 PM


cool poem!!

TomToo

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2 posted 2007-07-28 11:12 AM


good read
DennisTheMenace
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3 posted 2007-07-29 04:03 PM


Huh?

you must be way out there
not even got the month right

I figure you wrote it very high long ago and just found it

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