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Better At Goodbye
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Better At Goodbye |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced 
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I wonder which one of us would be the better at goodbye. You want to read my poems for you but all I can do is sigh. I shake my head no and say "maybe another day", you are knowing too much of me, I've given too much away. And looking into the future, I don't bother asking why, but somehow I just know you're better at goodbye. |
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BrittanyJ Member
since 2007-06-03
Posts 461Come find me? |
"And looking into the future, I don't bother asking why, but somehow I just know you're better at goodbye." I really liked this  So no more hiding all your pain, you deserve a new start. That's why i'm closing myself away, this is a message from your heart. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Goodbye is a settling...James |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
. Maybe because you make it so easy . |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ahhh...now you're listening... to what hasn't been said.  |
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lacydee Member
since 2007-06-17
Posts 130Indiana |
this is a sad one, Dixie girl, but so pretty. Hugs, Dee as for me and my house, we will serve the Lord. |
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Devious Intellectual Member
since 2006-05-08
Posts 112 |
yea def. hitting some feeling on me that i dont need right now haha, i like the emotion in this..especially for its length |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
short, but effectively emotive! applause!! |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
I am hopeless at goodbyes Hope |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Dixie...no-one wins at goodbyes.. this is a good write - enjoyed thanks RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Dear Dixie, none of us are good at goodbyes, but sometimes it is just for the better and we must move on. Letting go of what has grown around us must be the hardest thing to do, but not doing it prolongs the heartache, thus not allowing the brighter future to start. Enjoyed the read my friend, take care and Hello, not goodbye. Rick |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
good read |
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Winter Butterfly Member
since 2007-02-03
Posts 61The hidden path beyond the ivy gate. |
Having you been spying into my heart sis? *wipes a crystal from your eye* Only a fool would say goodbye to a golden winged phoenix. "I dreamed of a butterfly under a winter moon and when I awoke found snow upon my wings" |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
woah, What a subject I loved the words. hunnie. ~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~ |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Dix. I think you have had a lot of experience at it, and it has not been a really good thing for you... Sometimes we make the right choices in leaving or staying...we all manage to somehow sometimes screw it up!! |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"but somehow I just know you're better at goodbye" speechless here Dixie hits too hard |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
*~coco~* |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
good to be back indeed thank you all for such lovely comments very inspiring! |
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