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Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09
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0 posted 2007-07-27 10:29 AM


Envisioned now
in my mind
engines roaring
as roads unwind
upon open gravel
with magestic views
sunrise, sunset,
and golden hues

with wind rushing,
open air
for those moments
holding no care
ain't no blessing greater
that one can find
than stretched out roads
and windshield therapy time.

7-27-07
{for RickZ, the ride, & the peace}


If the sun never rises
I want to go down in flames
I want the last thing I hear
to be you whisperin' my name.
Each moment together
is time that we borrow
so hold me tight
and love me like
there's no tomorrow.
{Trace A}




© Copyright 2007 dmsmith - All Rights Reserved
nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
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Between the Lines
1 posted 2007-07-27 12:44 PM


I love this, Donna~~


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Janette
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Chicagoland for now
2 posted 2007-07-27 12:47 PM


You have captured a fun carefree ride but please watch out, one can get lost in the daydream which is kinda dangerous behind a wheel. *wink*

Enjoyed!

always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same

gwaihir
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since 2007-07-20
Posts 58
Sub-tropical, USA
3 posted 2007-07-27 09:28 PM


I am glad to have a name for this now.  I have been using this type of therapy for years.  Thanks, gs.  
secondhanddreampoet
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4 posted 2007-07-28 10:36 AM


grand title, fine poem [wonderful read!!]

sustained applause!!


vandana
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5 posted 2007-07-28 11:08 AM


nice write
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