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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2007-07-27 06:43 AM


though my rootery cancers the granite ides
I am a roman laugholic seeking blessing
a baptist's outpour from the worshiped sun

I fear not the saw man's hands
for I am madrono, I am manzanita
I am the wood of iron without water

there is no shade upon my threshold
my skin is the blister's inkwell
parched to gravel swallows by wind

as the ravens lithograph my shadows
as the moonquakes shiver under me
there is no lying eve to worship me

so I am but god to the devourers of wood


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daark

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1 posted 2007-07-27 09:00 AM


"as the moonquakes shiver under me
there is no lying eve to worship me"

way cool D  

Kahlil
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2 posted 2007-07-27 09:21 AM


Aren't they beautiful though?
Or...are you saying your bark is peeling?
Love the flow from your pen.

Gentle Spirit
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3 posted 2007-07-27 11:21 AM


You strum softly the shiver sounds of lovely poetry D.  
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4 posted 2007-07-27 12:28 PM


This is strong, as is the tree, and lyrical.
I enjoyed the smooth bark of this one.

always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same

Dark Stranger
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5 posted 2007-07-27 05:37 PM


ms suesea, thanks babe!

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ms kahlil, thank you for admiring the treeside of this...and if I peel I just get new ink..

___________

ms gs, thank you for the read and touch

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ms janette..thanks for walking in and looking around this forest

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