»
Archives
»
Open Poetry #41
»
Heart strings
| Open Poetry #41 |
|
Heart strings |
|
|
Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia 
|
The heart plays all so many strings But sour many sounds So rarely found, a heart which sings And for another pounds The tune of love holds such a key That many hearts can’t find The hidden cords that eye can’t see The siren sounds of passion free The road where hearts are blind Some cords, they seem so close and near But fruits of love won’t fall To what one thought to heart was clear Was not so clear at all So here I wish to be one blessed Who falls to Cupid’s spell To find I've love among the rest As others play as they know best In heaven or in hell |
||
| © Copyright 2007 Rick Van Weenen - All Rights Reserved | |||
|
Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
So many truths in this one Rick. Much enjoyed, very nice.  |
||
SEA 
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"The tune of love holds such a key That many hearts can’t find The hidden cords that eye can’t see The siren sounds of passion free The road where hearts are blind" loved this |
||
|
Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I have a placard in my kitchen, Rick. "God gave creation to this marriage... but he created lightning and thunder, too!" So I will know the intent of this, your heart strings... and it sings very well. Thank you, friend. |
||
|
Hyaunt Member
since 2007-07-12
Posts 74 |
nice! Hyaunt |
||
|
passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
excellent write! I am so enjoying this inspiration you have gotten lately, whatever it is  |
||
|
Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Gentle Spirit, great to see you here my friend, thank you so much for your reply, very much appreciated. Hi Sea, love seeing your replies, thank you my friend. Sunshine, thank you my friend, for the reply and message, great to have you visit. Hyaunt, thank you for your reply, much appreciated. Dear Dixie, thanks for the visit once again my friend, I don't know from where it comes, but may it keep coming, good to see you here again. To you all my friends, once again thank you all for your time and rely. Rick |
||
|
bel1e Senior Member
since 2006-07-24
Posts 1631 |
~oh~ niiiice poem~ ~enjoyed |
||
|
Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Hi bel1e, so glad you enjoyed this my friend, thank you for your reply, very much appreciated. Have a great day and take care. Rick |
||
suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
The tune of love holds such a key That many hearts can’t find How very true... and more than the ears hurt when you play off-key! *S* Excellent write, my friend! *S* |
||
|
Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Dear suthern, great to see you again, lovely to read your reply my friend thank you. have a great day and take care. Rick |
||
|
JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...James |
||
|
hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Such beautfiul meter and rhyme here. I love the format of this piece as well as all it has to say  Ruth |
||
|
Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Good to see you here Jamies, thanks for the reply my friend, appreciated. Hi Ruth, so glad you liked it, thank you for the visit and reply. Rick |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
