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Midnight Summer's Test
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Midnight Summer's Test |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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Midnight Summer's Test I know those words don't often reach through lips that miss the touch. Sometimes the unknown rises up blockading words of such. It isn't easy taking hold of feelings once in hide. Yet there they are a taste away, a kiss in want, denied. I know the times have changed each day leaving truth to rest upon a distant memory, a midnight summer's test. It isn't easy pressing forth, the bad along with good. It's even stranger when the course is often misunderstood. I know those words don't often reach where hearts can feel their "meant". Sometimes the distance leaves behind the warmth of their intent. M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
It isn't easy pressing forth, the bad along with good. It's even stranger when the course is often misunderstood. so true this is |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
powerfully expressive! These kind of 'tests' extend well beyond 'Midsummer nights', of course... I am particularly fond of the ending!: "I know those words don't often reach where hearts can feel their 'meant'. Sometimes the distance leaves behind the warmth of their intent." applause!! |
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Bronzeage Member
since 2007-07-20
Posts 197 |
I enjoyed this piece. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
A most powerful statement Maureen. Always so much heart in your words.  |
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TomMark Member Elite
since 2007-07-27
Posts 2133LA,CA |
love the read Tom |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Dixie, I knew you would understand  Bruce, Thank you, I kind of liked that verse too...because in long distance or even in short distance words can be misunderstood or seem to be "lacking". Bronzeage, Thank you for stopping by to read and respond. ThisDiamond, nice to see you here today.  and thank you.Thank You TomM. M |
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DennisTheMenace Member
since 2005-09-04
Posts 240 |
Another Missing, which is a hit poem, I'm missing today too. Poetry is good for mising |
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