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Without Me |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced 
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You fell for me hard, almost at first sight, my fault to have caught you off-guard, actually I had no right. You didn't want to live without me at your side, funny how you'd always forgive my flirting far and wide. But love can't reside in a place that has died. I let you go, for your own good. And hopefully soon you will see what you can do and what you should, that you'll be just fine without me. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Sometimes it is hard to move on, even when it is for the best. Nicely penned Dixie. |
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anam_cara76 Junior Member
since 2007-05-06
Posts 24USA |
Hard truth in good writing. Thanks |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...James |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
you have to do what's best for yourself to make you happy~~  M |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Hi Dixie, this sounds like a lonely poem with really no one happy, you brought the feeling of heartbreak across, passion and compassion, but also the view that life goes on, enjoyed the read my friend, thank you for sharing. Rick |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
thanks to each of you indeed a sad situation for all involved |
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IM COOL New Member
since 2007-07-25
Posts 2 |
I love it..."but love can't reside in a place that has died" WOWWWW Miss Dixie, your taking me back to places that I've tried to avoid; you hit that spot "SWEETBERRY" |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Letting go is the hardest part Hope |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
sweetberry...those spots are always good to hit my friend go there and smile and be grateful for what you have as of today I have missed you dearly Hope, thank you my dear friend...you are always a light |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
he'll miss you surely as your love for him still lives in his heart |
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DennisTheMenace Member
since 2005-09-04
Posts 240 |
rather sad,but well writ |
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poeticdestiny Junior Member
since 2007-07-29
Posts 19Georgia |
Nicely written..yet so sad. My favorite line: "but love can't reside in a place that has died" |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
hey dixie, have missed you. know exactly how you must feel My spirit will rise |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
good read  |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
hardest thing to do, is to put our own feelings and emotions aside and let those we adore go to grow and be groomed by life...a perception mother's have... hugs to ya |
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k20z3 Junior Member
since 2007-07-20
Posts 10 |
AMAZING great rhyming you should work for hallmark. |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Dixie Thinking of you. Good writing Sad times A |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
this is very sad, very good writing Dixie - thinking of you 'hugs' RDB x Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
VERY well written! applause!! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
 Just to remind you....there are many who care. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Oh you're so hard on that guy making him live without you! What if he was lost and alone forever after that.....Wouldn't you just cry......LOL! Goos write! Eric |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
little echo down here Dixie saying, "sad, so sad" and it speaks to me well done |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Always remember You Are Loved for who you are. "late" |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Dixie...echoing all the above. Be well, sweet lady and come back soon. ....jo |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Dixie, this stings...such honesty, such brutal honesty. love it! "Life is not measured by the breaths we take, but by the moments that take our breath away" |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
A lovely poem Dixie written with a lot of thought. Sad, but these things do happen. blue skies for you in the future. LindsayP |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
Thank you all...it took me awhile to get back here to read the replies glad to be back again |
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SouthernJustice Member
since 2007-12-15
Posts 159 |
Magnifiscent write, "SJ" |
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