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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2007-07-25 06:54 AM


kata of song
in bamboo dojo
so folds the hands
of dragons in gloves

our silk is golden
and our minds broken
wheels with notches
needing the pearl's filling

there will be ample rain
in our sky today
to water willow places
and sooth the slippery elm

of geishas in beige slender


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daark

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Gentle Spirit
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1 posted 2007-07-25 07:35 AM


This took me to one of those beautiful round rooms in my mind D.  Simply lovely thoughts and oh yes, it did make me smile....
BBGrrl
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2 posted 2007-07-25 11:35 AM


This one smells subtly of incense and speaks of a Ronin and a Lady to me.

Enjoyed.

Dark Stranger
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3 posted 2007-07-26 06:31 AM


thank you donna and BB...actually a meditation garden setting outside of santa barb..overlooks a beach I admire...place to day dream
Gentle Spirit
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4 posted 2007-07-26 10:06 AM


cool, sounds like a lovely place to daydream
aziza
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5 posted 2007-08-01 02:17 AM


All I know is it soothes me to read this.

Wonderful - like water
over my mind

A

Dark Stranger
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6 posted 2007-08-01 06:22 AM


ms gs, thanks to you

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ms az, a pleasure to sooth ms, thanks

bel1e
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7 posted 2007-08-01 08:19 AM


~invocation of the geisha....drew me in~
~much enjoyed this, daddy~

~beLLe


Dark Stranger
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8 posted 2007-08-02 06:46 AM


oh babygirl you are my dream pantha always
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