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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2007-07-24 08:46 AM


Needless To Say

Tonite I
saw a woman
that I couldn't
take my eyes from.
I watched her for awhile
to see if her personality
would cause me
to turn away.
Needless to say,
I didn't turn away
and as I felt those
feelings that know
how to touch my heart,
I smiled while
I ask her name.

JamesLee
23July
2007





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Gentle Spirit
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1 posted 2007-07-24 08:48 AM


aww James, and I smiled reading this.     It is a truth, that we have to look past the outside to see what lies within.  Nicely penned m'friend.
suthern
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2 posted 2007-07-24 09:20 AM


This leaves me smiling with all the possibilities... excellent write!!
passing shadows
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3 posted 2007-07-24 10:39 AM


there is a girl who works with me and she is really pretty...all the men (who use to fall all over her) say that she's ugly in her personality and I'm the most beautiful one out at the mill

maybe that's why she doesn't like me much...I'm competition LOL


vandana
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4 posted 2007-07-24 11:27 AM


nicely done
Hyaunt
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5 posted 2007-07-24 12:47 PM


nice! Hyaunt
JamesMichael
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6 posted 2007-07-24 04:52 PM


Thank you Gentle Spirit, suthern, passing shadows, vandana and Hyaunt for the wonderful responses...
Passing indeed you are...I hope you find a special man that appreciates the sum of your beauty...James

The Lady
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7 posted 2007-07-24 10:42 PM




warms the heart James

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