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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2007-07-24 06:54 AM


and now I wonder of the nightingale
that whispers her wings at dawn
there at some indigo momentum

as her eyes fold to smiles
are there tears when she heals
and then the whispering of her mouth

with lips as idols to the kiss gods
do they now speak praying chords
strummed from the heart of woman

would she notice my antics ploy
with blades and pins to prick my skin
writhing in my gravel pretensions

just to be cradled at her bosom's shadow
and soothed with fingertip solutions
would she nurse me with her laughter

or call me but her roguish quixote


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logography by daark


[This message has been edited by Dark Stranger (07-24-2007 09:42 PM).]

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1 posted 2007-07-24 08:55 AM


"and of the whispering of her mouth

with lips as idols to the kiss gods
do they now speak praying chords
strummed from the heart of woman"
just love this

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2 posted 2007-07-24 09:25 AM


Perhaps both. *S*

I like this very much, DS... beautiful write!

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3 posted 2007-07-24 09:31 AM


I think, that she would just smile and allow her eyes to tell you that she has the best, of both worlds.  
Dark Stranger
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4 posted 2007-07-24 09:45 PM


suesea, thank you lady friend

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ms suthern, thank you for the blessing

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ms gs, she does smile lovely, thanks ms

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aziza
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6 posted 2007-08-01 02:01 AM


Someone I know often says
"you smile me"
Well,YOU smile me.

Lots & often as I read your pictures.

Dark Stranger
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7 posted 2007-08-01 06:24 AM


ms ps, thanks for the smile

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ms az, thank you for the touch ms

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8 posted 2007-08-01 08:23 AM


LOL~

as lovely as ever I remember~

~good to see you, darkie~

~beLLe


Dark Stranger
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9 posted 2007-08-02 06:45 AM


daughter of smiles, as always you are lovely
thanks babe

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