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yvetters_24
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0 posted 2007-07-24 04:55 AM



this might now make much sense but its about a song a friend told me about well yeah srry its not in the right form either

I remember you told me to listen to this song not to long ago you said this song explained they things that were going so wrong I didn't understand at the time what the song really meant. I didn't understand the pain you felt because I never felt the pain for myself, but I understood what was wrong I new you needed someone to be there for you a person opposite to the song a person not looking right thru you someone who would see you for you. I don't know if I was that person or not but i tried to be I know I didn't always know what to say or even say the right words but I was still there when you needed me to be. Now im listening to this song im listening to the words and its like for the first time I understand it I know what it means because your helping me understand it. Your helping me fill the same pain im guessing you felt a friend who turns away who looks thru you someone to busy to see you. You don't see me unless im the only on there. I guess im not throwing you the obvious; you don't see you're making me understand this song the way you understood it when you hurt so bad u wanted to cry every time you heard it. I understand your painful tears now because im shedding some of my own but the point to this is its difficult not to fill just a little disappointed that that your totally oblivious to what your doing to me but I guess I expected to much from you

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