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evening in New York |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest 
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small room he works it well calling people to him with the smell of his charm long brown fingers in their graceful move I watch him in the corner chatting ladies each fancying herself his lover naked skin under tiny hot lights oil lies heavy on canvas each piece speaking of just buy and leave art is art not commerce when the lights go down we walk matched steps yellow sundress wet shoulders long brown fingers at my waist street lights tugging at rain quiet intimate city now ours my only true art he says in his wet smoothness is you |
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Bronzeage Member
since 2007-07-20
Posts 197 |
I like this. A beautiful piece with wonderful feeling. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
thank you very much Bronzeage! |
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MoonShadow Senior Member
since 2001-08-02
Posts 943Dark side of the Moon. |
"my only true art he says in his wet smoothness is you" Oh, how I can relate to this, I dare not say. It seeps inside and touches deep,Milady, very deep. MoonShadow . |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
a wonderfully descriptive poem fine imagery that I always adore from you Kate |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Oh....sharp breath........perfection |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
this 'write' is great! [a grand-fine mix of sensual and powerfully emotive impressionism and realism!] serious applause!! |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
gentle MoonShadow thank you deeply Sir thank you so much Dixie gentle Donna thank you hugs for you poet I appreciate you always |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
"is you" at the end of the day the end of brush is the true muse of magic |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
thank you Helen  |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Kate You make me smile. You share such wonderful with us And I accept as I peer in your window. A |
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Songbird Member Elite
since 1999-12-15
Posts 2184Missouri |
This poem has great imagery, it is your art! |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Thank you Songbird for bringing this up. This truly says a lot. "late" |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
thank you so much Alison, Songbird and "late" |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
wonderful imagery. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
thank you March! |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Beautiful Poem Loved it deeply ARCTIC WIND |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
thank you ARCTIC |
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PoppaLoco Member
since 2007-09-23
Posts 83EU, NL, Limburg |
Have never been to New York, but feel a deep desire to see that world through your eyes now. Very very powerful.. Pops |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
I thank you so much Pops! |
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