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Jason Lyle
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since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438
With my darkling

0 posted 2007-07-23 05:06 PM


At once, I knew that anger sent
concealed the things
I truly meant

a furrowed brow
and clenching fist
it tipped you off
I might be p*****

was never good
at hiding things
I'm even worse
confiding things

your chalkboard voice
my impatient ways
clashed somewhere near
our end of days

at the face of it
we were right as rain
at the end of it
mutual source of pain

you are my drug of choice
a meeting twice a day
won't keep me alive
or you away

they like me short and sweet
and I like dirty girls
I am the filth for you
and your're my dirty pearl

and so we found a way
its absolute
and walk away
from what we both pollute



[This message has been edited by Jason Lyle (07-25-2007 06:55 AM).]

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Hyaunt
Member
since 2007-07-12
Posts 74

1 posted 2007-07-24 01:00 PM


profound!

Hyaunt

BBGrrl
Member
since 2007-07-17
Posts 181
BC, Canada
2 posted 2007-07-24 09:52 PM


Very dark, Jason - nicely said.
"Truelly" is actually "truly"

passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
3 posted 2007-07-25 02:05 PM


awesome!

I love how this flows!

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