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WindWalker
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since 2001-10-12
Posts 1218


0 posted 2007-07-23 04:32 PM


Everyone sees and experiences life
through a personal life-filter
a personal, inviolable thought process
that endlessly creates personal truth
that cannot be gainsaid.

Everyone else will always see the world
uniquely differently than I do
so must I bend my thoughts,
to perceive the heartbeat
of another's story upon the Earth –
a story every bit as true
as the one I tell myself each moment
though expressed in different words.

The ugliness or the beauty;
how they see in the world
will always challenge my truth.
But how can such be judged?
What criteria can be used
to determine the right or wrong of it?
None. There is no right or wrong
outside of judgment.

I can do more than listen
to another’s inner journey
as it is experienced:
I can allow them to use their gift,
their piece of life,
in any way they choose.

If it is destructive (to me)
I’m sure that compassion
has already taken that into consideration –
I can rely on compassion,
a much safer tool than condemnation.

© Copyright 2007 Sharran WindWalker - All Rights Reserved
secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !
1 posted 2007-07-23 06:26 PM


I am particularly fond of the ending!:

"I can do more than listen
to another’s inner journey
as it is experienced:
I can allow them to use their gift,
their piece of life,
in any way they choose.

If it is destructive (to me)
I’m sure that compassion
has already taken that into consideration –
I can rely on compassion,
a much safer tool than condemnation."

I find that most American folk these days do not really even
want to 'truly' listen to other people's 'stories' (let alone "do
more than listen")...they just want an 'audience' for their own 'story'!

Applause!!

INclan
Senior Member
since 1999-07-20
Posts 1024
Indiana, USA
2 posted 2007-07-23 08:36 PM


What then is truth...but simply what we believe it to be.

Excellent thought provoking poem.

Thank you,
INclan

The Lady
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634
The Southwest
3 posted 2007-07-23 09:37 PM



I am in total agreement with poet
and the ending blows me away...


A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart
4 posted 2007-07-23 11:26 PM


Love is always the answer!

MoonShadow
Senior Member
since 2001-08-02
Posts 943
Dark side of the Moon.
5 posted 2007-07-24 07:09 AM


   A pause for thought and a deep breath; a second read and a calm smile.
   Thank you for a wonderful way to start my day.

           MoonShadow
.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
6 posted 2007-07-24 01:05 PM




awesome!

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