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Jaime Fradera
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Where no tyranny is tolerable

0 posted 2007-07-23 04:45 AM



(Well, since it looks like I'm not going to get any sleep tonight, I might as well do this one).

I dream you with enchanted heart.
Can you dream me, too?
I see you through enchanted eyes.
Can you see me, too?
I read you with enchanted hands.
Can you feel me now, too?
Yes, sweet Karen,
This one's for you!
:-----------)

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Larry C
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1 posted 2007-07-23 12:00 PM


Enchanting...

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane,
I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
2 posted 2007-07-23 04:19 PM


"I read you with enchanted hands."
a great line~~

M

Jaime Fradera
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since 2000-11-25
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Where no tyranny is tolerable
3 posted 2007-07-23 06:51 PM


Yes, Maurene
"I read you with enchanted hands"
is an oblique reference to Braille;
As these blue pages do in fact come to me in Braille ...
As with magic fingers, I trace "between the lines."
To you, M, too!

secondhanddreampoet
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a 'Universalist' !
4 posted 2007-07-23 07:12 PM


nice!
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