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Break A Heartbreak Spell
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Break A Heartbreak Spell |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Break A Heartbreak Spell He goes there everyday at a given time to a hurting place within his mind. Its like a ritual thats verboten that needs to be put away and forgotten. Its like a bad Broadway play that needs to fail and go away. Perhaps there's a way to break a heartbreak spell, a way to gain new storys to tell. Storys of happiness and love and romance. Storys of a heart that feared not to take a chance... to share a dance. JamesLee 22July 2007 verboten-forbidden(in German) |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
oh James...this is so touching and so very heartfelt...wonderful  |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Oh, what an achy breaky read. I really felt it. Now, my Island friend, go and write a new and happy love story ~ and manifest it into reality.   Linda |
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SPIRIT Senior Member
since 2002-12-29
Posts 1745California Desert |
This is a slow and sad song here, but I did enjoy the read. Dinah |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
we all get into routines *understanding this well* |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you Sea, Earth Angel, Spitit and passing shadows for the nice responses... this is about the desire to break away from a routine, to depart from a place of pain...a process that begans with a mind change...and a desire for something better...James |
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Hyaunt Member
since 2007-07-12
Posts 74 |
always romantic!!! |
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MoonShadow Senior Member
since 2001-08-02
Posts 943Dark side of the Moon. |
Time may heal but scars run deep. Let the beautiful memories outshine and melt away the pain. MoonShadow . |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
hurting place... excellent write James |
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Edward Grim Senior Member
since 2005-12-18
Posts 1154Greenville, South Carolina |
What's forbidden about it? “Well all the apostles, they’re sittin’ on the swings, sayin’ I’d sell off my savior for a set of new rings.” |
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Ulysses Junior Member
since 2007-09-20
Posts 10 |
Thanks for your commentson "In Another Life..." - I thought I'd return the favour! Really liked this, partucularly the line: Storys of a heart that feared not to take a chance... to share a dance. Interesting rhythm and sentiments we all know sooo well. Good stuff! |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Hi James, I really liked the lines "It's like a bad Broadway play That has to fail to go away" |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank yuo Hyaunt, Moon Shadow, The Lady, Edward, ulysses and Marchmadness for the nice responses... Edward whats forbidden is to wallow in foolishness for too long. New choices can be made, opening a door to new opportunities...James |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
James Michael another poem of yours that really enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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