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Open Poetry #41

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Huan Yi
Member Ascendant

since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

0 posted 2007-07-22 04:01 PM

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Under the light
Of a compassionate moon
To walk by the shore
Of a considerate sea

And once again
As when limbs were young
And hearts were new

Make Mars
And Venus
Silently envious

And time indifferent
To the hour

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nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

1 posted 2007-07-22 04:20 PM

Beautiful John~~ especially:
"And time indifferent
To the hour"

M

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

2 posted 2007-07-22 06:38 PM

Time

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2007-07-22 09:03 PM

I often shake my head and wonder where you find the inspiration

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

4 posted 2007-07-23 09:23 AM

Absolutely beautiful... each line is a gem!!

Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

5 posted 2007-07-23 04:03 PM

Gotta say, I like it too. Nicely done.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane,
I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

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