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My Fairy Land
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My Fairy Land |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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My Fairy Land My fairy land has gone awry Not because it was a lie But because of energy That could for me no longer be I rest upon a divan couch In a restive divan slouch And thinking past this tired peer Is further than you’d think was near The tired slowed the time of day The time of night the very way It slowed the process of the grime Each moment’s dew of logic time It interferes each place of cue It interferes the place of you It interferes the tired twist It interferers the very gist I’m waiting for a better day Perhaps a better, better way |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
hopefully you will have a better day tomorrow, Sy...  M |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
As always, it is good to read your poetic thought and words. The energy challenge is one that I'm facing, as well. Is it true that energy is really never lost, but rather channeled differently? miscellanea |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
miscellanea Perhaps, perhaps. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Maureen, I hope so. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
a wish for a better day Sir Sy and a thank you for your words |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Lady Thank you, thank you.  |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
And isn't it so different... the way we feel when we're tired from doing something... and the way we feel when we're too tired to do? Wishing you a better day... refreshed and renewed. *S* Beautiful write, my friend!! |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I think what you will get, dear poet... Is a better, sweeter, kinder way...   |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I hope all is better today, Sy M |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Well now, perhaps this is a better, better day today, since I missed this yesterday?  I sure hope so.  Much enjoyed this wonderful, wonderful read, sweet Sy. Best wishes and hugs, /Kit |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
thoughtful, interesting 'write'! [touching upon, I believe, what a very many of us are feeling...and not just because of the general progression and effects of 'aging'; but also because "American Culture" has become such a 'burn out'!] applause!! |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
sending lots of hope and good wishes, as well as a huge smile for all the wonderful things that you have given us in the years that we all have been here. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
To all the dear above I have not answered. Thank you from the bottom of my heart. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
I got to missing your poetry today, Sy, so I did a search and found this. Gosh, I hope you're feeling better. *big hug*.....jo |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
tired energy, needs a good rest, cool, sweet and filled with stardust, and then.... Hello Sy...seems like a long time, and I've missed reading you... excellent write |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
I hope you have a better day, real soon. |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
I hope that you are better and I want you to know that (even though I don't know you) I look for your poetry and miss you when I don't see it. You have shared a wonderful part of yourself with so many - and you have made me smile with the kindness of your soul. Please, know I think of you. Alison |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Alison, I think we all feel the same about Sy - I look to see if he posted today, and if not, I go into the archives. He is one poet that when absent is truly missed. |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Sy, your lovely poetry has been missed by all. Hoping you are resting and will be gracing these pages soon. "late" |
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ivordavies Senior Member
since 2007-01-10
Posts 739Chester, England |
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ "I’m waiting for a better day Perhaps a better, better way" ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ I always have a better day when Seymour Tabin has his say. His words placed in his unique way to give our thoughts a place to play. "Perhaps a better, better way" The pathway to a better day? Your mastery of the 'real meaning' that needs to be sought always leaves me..... seeking more Ivor |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...and hoping for better days for you...James |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
My dear sweet sonneteering friend, I have missed reading your poetry so I went looking for one to get my Sigh fix. Since writing this poem, your venerable ticker has given you some problems. Once it is back in fine working order, I know that your "Fairy Land" will be a joyful place again. In retrospect, it is almost as though you knew that you were heading into rough waters when you wrote this poem. Love you, T-Man! Giving you the biggest, warmest, loving, healing hug in the whole wide Universe, Your Earth Angel |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Sy, No matter how good or bad the day, The poetry is always superb, and the man, always gracious and pleasant. Thank you just for being you Love Liz |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I have missed your words, dear friend... Big hugs to you and your lovely lady... I just wish I could deliver them in person! |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
 Sy, your words resonate in my heart. It's been a while since I've been on site and I've missed your thoughts. ~ Karen |
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