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aujussy wolf
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0 posted 2007-07-21 03:57 PM



The wind pushed passed  me as I stepped out into the night
What a time for a moon journey  my friend ,
I realize the end is the beginning and the beginning is the end
The stars like a sea of diamonds  that forever extend
Leading me home again

The familiar sounds of footsteps on the roadside
Dust on my shoes and a ticket for a free ride
The wanderer sleeps  with the lightning bug s and fungicide
If you can’t find me, check the surgeon bay waterside


Stoned and walking a great blues jam still yet to be played
The past transforms as the future fades  ..away
From a old slate grey to a jewel green jade, …
My eyes changed shade
On this little summer midnight escapade


I walked a road I never walked , without an invite

Dreams add color to a life that’s black and white
Optimistic insight
Magic wizard lantern light shines bright like a night-lite
Aura’s driving to see  insight  
I saw it in the distance …..
Out of  chance
Caught by a side glance
It  was a free-lance dance with circumstance


JDW III 7-20-07



In his mantle gray he walked one day across a shining floor and with crystal key in secrecy he opened an ivory door -J.R.R. Tolkien(T.Bombadil-the adv

[This message has been edited by aujussy wolf (07-22-2007 09:18 PM).]

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1 posted 2007-07-21 05:03 PM


I like this
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2 posted 2007-07-21 06:10 PM


Nice read. I enjoyed this.
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3 posted 2007-07-21 09:14 PM


good to read you again

you've been missed


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4 posted 2007-07-22 08:49 AM


Oh James, it is so very good to read you again and you bring such a wonderful dream like vision alive right before our eyes.  How cool is this.  Awesome babe, love it.

You have been missed.  

Don't stay away so long next time, k?  



If the sun never rises
I want to go down in flames
I want the last thing I hear
to be you whisperin' my name.
Each moment together
is time that we borrow
so hold me tight
and love me like
there's no tomorrow.
{Trace A}

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5 posted 2007-07-22 12:24 PM


Lot of great images here, aj wolf.

In the third stanza did you mean escapade rather than escaped?  Just wondering since that's how I read it the first time.      

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6 posted 2007-07-22 01:43 PM


I enjoyed this night stroll, the imagery of stars, "dust on my shoes" and the blues...
good to read you again, aujussy

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7 posted 2007-07-24 06:25 PM


Magic'' ohhhh you say it so well, with such images....Indigo is a beautiful color... hugssss you

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of holding on and letting go (KU)

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8 posted 2007-07-25 12:30 PM


I love this!  A glimpse into your dreamy mind.
So good to see you here again.
~K

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9 posted 2007-07-25 09:31 AM


"Dreams add color to a life that’s black and white
Optimistic insight'

My favorite lines...


"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

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10 posted 2007-08-04 01:49 PM


~and there's that old, familiar wolf howwwwl~

hi wolfie~

so good to see you~

~great poem~
~beLLe

  

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11 posted 2007-08-08 02:18 PM


woooooo hooo thanks eveyone !!! glad u liked it . this was just kinda a fun one, lotta walkin produced this write lol . much luv ~J
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