Open Poetry #41 |
Indigo Nights |
aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
The wind pushed passed me as I stepped out into the night What a time for a moon journey my friend , I realize the end is the beginning and the beginning is the end The stars like a sea of diamonds that forever extend Leading me home again The familiar sounds of footsteps on the roadside Dust on my shoes and a ticket for a free ride The wanderer sleeps with the lightning bug s and fungicide If you can’t find me, check the surgeon bay waterside Stoned and walking a great blues jam still yet to be played The past transforms as the future fades ..away From a old slate grey to a jewel green jade, … My eyes changed shade On this little summer midnight escapade I walked a road I never walked , without an invite Dreams add color to a life that’s black and white Optimistic insight Magic wizard lantern light shines bright like a night-lite Aura’s driving to see insight I saw it in the distance ….. Out of chance Caught by a side glance It was a free-lance dance with circumstance JDW III 7-20-07 In his mantle gray he walked one day across a shining floor and with crystal key in secrecy he opened an ivory door -J.R.R. Tolkien(T.Bombadil-the adv [This message has been edited by aujussy wolf (07-22-2007 09:18 PM).] |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I like this |
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Bronzeage Member
since 2007-07-20
Posts 197 |
Nice read. I enjoyed this. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
good to read you again you've been missed |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Oh James, it is so very good to read you again and you bring such a wonderful dream like vision alive right before our eyes. How cool is this. Awesome babe, love it. You have been missed. Don't stay away so long next time, k? If the sun never rises I want to go down in flames I want the last thing I hear to be you whisperin' my name. Each moment together is time that we borrow so hold me tight and love me like there's no tomorrow. {Trace A} |
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gwaihir Member
since 2007-07-20
Posts 58Sub-tropical, USA |
Lot of great images here, aj wolf. In the third stanza did you mean escapade rather than escaped? Just wondering since that's how I read it the first time. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I enjoyed this night stroll, the imagery of stars, "dust on my shoes" and the blues... good to read you again, aujussy |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Magic'' ohhhh you say it so well, with such images....Indigo is a beautiful color... hugssss you ~~**~~ |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
I love this! A glimpse into your dreamy mind. So good to see you here again. ~K |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
"Dreams add color to a life that’s black and white Optimistic insight' My favorite lines... "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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bel1e Senior Member
since 2006-07-24
Posts 1631 |
~and there's that old, familiar wolf howwwwl~ hi wolfie~ so good to see you~ ~great poem~ ~beLLe
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
woooooo hooo thanks eveyone !!! glad u liked it . this was just kinda a fun one, lotta walkin produced this write lol . much luv ~J |
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