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Open Poetry #41

Perfect Stranger

k20z3
Junior Member

since 2007-07-20

Posts 10

0 posted 2007-07-20 03:34 PM

Perfect stranger
Where have i seen you?
You look so familiar
I swear that ive met you.
There's something about the
way you look at me
Your eyes stare with intensity
as if my face strikes your memory.
Someone you used to know well.
Now perfect strangers,
in an instance memories unwind
we observe eachother from a distance.
your presence reminds me of my adolescence
Fate would have it we meet
at the same exit.
That look takes me back
what do we say how do we act.
It used to be i felt anger
but how can i be angry
at a stranger.

We've grown so far apart
i can only remember when we
had a piece of eachothers heart.
The time, our age, the smell
everythings vague, memories
and feelings they fade.
You smile i smile we chat
for a while.
We both make an excuse
to cut eachother loose.
"I have someone to meet"
"Yea i parked my car on the street"
as we both leave we look back
for a moment were tooken back.
Time is still were motionless,
our first date our first kiss.
Memories and images running wild
it seems like forever since
we were together ill always
remember you perfect stranger.

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2007-07-20 04:35 PM

"That look takes me back
what do we say how do we act.
It used to be i felt anger
but how can i be angry
at a stranger"

I love this part...
Welcome to Pip!

k20z3
Junior Member

since 2007-07-20

Posts 10

2 posted 2007-07-20 05:10 PM

Thanks i appreciate your comment.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2007-07-20 05:42 PM

Nice...stirs up emotions...James

aziza
Member Elite

since 2006-07-09

Posts 2995
Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!

4 posted 2007-07-21 01:22 AM

I like this lots.
Welcome to PiP.

Alison

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