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trevorskogsbergh
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since 2000-02-03
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South Pasadena, CA

0 posted 2007-07-20 02:48 PM



Wave's of feelings tear at my mind

Sleep so far away

Cherished thoughts seemed so grand

Alone I sit and pray

Like an old book upon the shelf

My cries set aside

Worries fill the void I feel

The pressure builds inside

Only time will tell the future of us

No traces of what to do

With all these memories that we share

Only hope will see us through

Better to die, and sleep
The never-waking sleep, than linger on
And dare to live when the souls life is gone.


© Copyright 2007 Trevor Skogsbergh - All Rights Reserved
k20z3
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since 2007-07-20
Posts 10

1 posted 2007-07-20 03:55 PM


Nice write up try counting sheep lol.
passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
2 posted 2007-07-20 09:30 PM


you and me both hon


Paula Finn
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since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546
missouri
3 posted 2007-07-25 10:07 PM


Well hello you!!! It's been so very long since I've had the pleasure of your company...very nice write.
HopeS
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since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia
4 posted 2007-07-26 01:52 PM


This sounds so much like me , hey how's it going south of the river

Hope

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