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Paula Finn
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since 2000-06-17
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missouri

0 posted 2007-07-19 06:04 PM



I am
    The moon to your sun
    drinking in your heat
    and spilling it back to
    you in the cold of the night.

I am
    The wind to your trees
    whispering over your skin
    breathing in your ear
    touching you even when
    I'm not near.

I am
    The shore to your ocean
    giving you a safe haven
    a place to rest before
    you go on again.

I am
    The dawn to your night
    a new beginning each
    morning, a fresh chance
    to be something more this day.

Apart we are different
separate...alone

Together we become...one

© Copyright 2007 Paula Finn - All Rights Reserved
passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
1 posted 2007-07-19 06:10 PM


I am
    The dawn to your night
    a new beginning each
    morning, a fresh chance
    to be something more this day.

excellent

SEA
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with you
2 posted 2007-07-19 06:16 PM


oh yes.... this is so delicate and lovely
Jaime Fradera
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since 2000-11-25
Posts 843
Where no tyranny is tolerable
3 posted 2007-07-19 06:50 PM


Paula,
you were
the one who got me started,
helped me get
a foot in the door
into this
cool
pips
thing.
Remember?
Love you me,
J


JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
4 posted 2007-07-19 07:18 PM


Not haveing these thoughts we are one...having these thoughts we fuel for desire for two....James
Kahlil
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since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881

5 posted 2007-07-20 09:40 AM


This write has such a peaceful sureness to it.
I especially love:
The wind to your trees
    whispering over your skin
    breathing in your ear
    touching you even when
    I'm not near.

Wonderful!

MoonShadow
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since 2001-08-02
Posts 943
Dark side of the Moon.
6 posted 2007-07-20 10:16 AM



  Apart we are different
separate...alone

Together we become...one

    Wonderful ending to a lovely romantic write. Thank you for sharing this beauty.

         MoonShadow
.

aziza
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since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995
Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!
7 posted 2007-08-01 12:22 PM


You are beautiful in all that you share here.

Lovely, Paula.

A

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