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MoonShadow
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Dark side of the Moon.

0 posted 2007-07-19 03:47 PM


"You are..."

You’re the air that I breathe
that lets me live so free.
You’re the joy within my soul
that lets me just be me.
You’re the beauty that inspires
and predicates my art.
You’re the passion flame
that melts my loving heart.
You’re the starshine glow
that fills my every dream.
You’re the guiding light,
perfection so it seems.
You’re the treasured soul,
all that I adore.
You’re the gift divine,
all I need and more.

MoonShadow


© Copyright 2007 Kenneth W. Myers - All Rights Reserved
Magnus
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1 posted 2007-07-19 05:11 PM


All a part of what we wish to see, to feel
to hold and touch...excellent thoughts.

secondhanddreampoet
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2 posted 2007-07-19 05:59 PM


once again...most fine 'Romanticism'!

[a joy to read!]

applause!!

Larry C
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3 posted 2007-07-19 06:48 PM


Kenneth,
It seems it can't get better than this. A lovely romantic write.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane,
I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

SEA
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with you
4 posted 2007-07-19 06:50 PM


"You’re the treasured soul,
all that I adore.
You’re the gift divine,
all I need and more."


wow that is beyond sweet...loved this

JamesMichael
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5 posted 2007-07-19 07:19 PM


One of your finest romantic writes...James
Ceinwyn
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6 posted 2007-07-19 07:21 PM


I was pretending my boyfriend was serenading me with these sweet romantic words

If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

MoonShadow
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Dark side of the Moon.
7 posted 2007-07-20 07:51 AM


  
   Magnus, Bruce, Larry, SEA and James... Thank you so much for your read and kind words. Always good to hear you enjoyed.

   Ceinwyn... imagine the response if you were to say the same words to him. Thank you for the response, glad you enjoyed.

        MoonShadow
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vandana
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8 posted 2007-07-20 12:23 PM


good read
The Lady
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9 posted 2007-07-21 06:56 PM




and you are possibly
the most romantic man in the world
gentle MoonShadow

beautiful...

Midnitesun
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10 posted 2007-07-21 07:00 PM


"You’re the joy within my soul
that lets me just be me."
Lovely!

passing shadows
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11 posted 2007-07-21 09:30 PM


well, I know I read this earlier...thought I replied but I didn't

beautiful romantic write Ken

gives me back a little faith in men these days

jwesley
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12 posted 2007-07-21 10:15 PM


...nothing can be bad about a write that returns a little faith....much enjoyed my friend...

jwesley

MoonShadow
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Dark side of the Moon.
13 posted 2007-07-23 03:00 PM


  Vandana - Thank you for the read and kind response.

  Kate- I fear that I am hopelessly cursed so, Milady, a condition that I am powerless to cure.

  Midnightsun - Glad you enjoyed.

  Dixie - Faith breeds hope... both of which we could all use a little of. Thank you for your response.

  JWesley - Thank you for your kind words.

             MoonShadow
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