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georgia, georgia |
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mytuesdaywishes Member
since 2003-09-05
Posts 254a voice from the musicbox 
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one night i spent a month inhaling the thick honeysuckle sussurus the long summer swift dark where ray charles croons still, forever. i am sorry i woke you when they took away all the effulgent woods i am sorry we were there to see the second burning of atlanta and every wild mouse marched into the basement. |
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shirtless Member
since 2006-04-29
Posts 359 |
very impressive i clicked the link to your web page, but it didn't work |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
very cool write, I think it must mean so much more that we can get...  |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
I am glad that I stopped to read. I really like this and would like to read more of your poetry. A |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
you speak of Georgia with great intensity Rachael and I read it the same way well done! |
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Bronzeage Member
since 2007-07-20
Posts 197 |
I like the melody and flow of your words. It reads very smooth, but it reads as if you are using obscure images to intentionally hide the meaning. |
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